一个小时就写完的introduction

一个小时就写完了introduction?这要是让教授们知道了,他们一定会震惊得目瞪口呆!不过,开玩笑了,introduction确实是论文的开头部分,虽然篇幅不多,但写得好却非常重要。
很多同学在写论文时都会遇到引言这一块的困扰。
今天,我就来和大家分享一下引言的高分写作技巧和例句,希望能帮助到大家!

首先,我们在introduction中清晰地说明论文的主旨,并简要介绍一些相关背景知识。不需要太多,1-2句就足够了。可以在开头解释一下一些专业术语、关键词和特殊符号,然后再用一句话给出背景信息,突出我们要讨论的话题的重要性。

接下来,我们要介绍一下当前的研究水平和存在的问题。
不要拖延,2-4句就足够了。然后,要指出需要填补的研究空白,并用一句话清楚地解释这个问题是什么,为什么要研究,以及它的重要性。

在介绍文献综述时,我们可以简要回顾一下相关的研究文献。可以提一下我们参考的背景文件,并指出这些文件的不足之处。

蕞后,在引言中简单明了地说明本文的目标。目标不要太罗嗦,1-2句话就可以了。我们的目标就是填补研究空白,解jue问题,并进行清晰的探讨。

作为论文开篇,introduction嘛,字数不多。但真得写的有点儿水平。写的6,教授直接给你提分30+,这门面绝对不能马虎过啊!不少同学写论文时候,就被这一块绊住了!今天咱就来分享下intro的高分写法和例句,希望给赶Due的宝子提供点帮助!

1、论文主题+知识背景(5分钟)

咱得先把论文的主旨摆明,还得夹带点背景知识,别多,就1-2句

开篇就先给这些术语、关键词、特殊符号啥的来个解释:然后,再来一句给出背景信息,突出咱主题的重要性

Exomple:

An XYZ battery is a battery … The electrodes in anXYZ telephon ebattery are made of a composite ofgold and silver, coated with a layer of platinum.Thegold and silver provide structural support, while theplatinum provides resilince.

例句:

lt is necessary here to clarify exactly what is meant by

The phrase ‘x will be used in this study to describethe ..

ln this article, the abbreviation XYZ will be used torefer to ..

Recent developments in X have heightened the needfor .. .

Research gap (10分钟)

.交代下现有的技术水平,还有那些等待着解决的问题,不拖沓,就2—4句,接着,把要弥补的研究空白挑明;用一句话清楚地交代这问题是什么、为啥咱要探究这个问题,还有这问题有多么地重要

Example:

The performance of the battery can be strongly af-fected by the number of times the battery is recharged and the duration of each individ-ual recharge. The batery is subject to three possible failure modes. .. .

Lack of X has existed as a health problem for manyyears.

is a major environmental problem, and the maincause of..

Exposure to X hos been shown to be related to ad-verse effects in …

论文目标(5分钟)

号咱这篇论文的目标,就简单点说,不多1—2句左右咱的目标就是填补那个研究空白,把问题给捋顺,拎得清楚Exomple:

Aresearch program has recently been started by theauthors in collaboration with amojor batery manu facturer, with the goal of devel-oping new design models for XYz batteries.Analytical techniques are needed that canpreict..

例句:

Speifically, the fllowing ssues will be addressed:Secondly, the study aims to assess the extent towhich …

文献回顾(10分钟)咱就简单进行文献回顾

说说咱参考的那些背景文献,也提一嘴这些文献的短板Example:

Computational techniques have been extensively ap-plled to the study of the life time of XYZ batteries, inparticular with regard to the number of times a bat-tery is charged.

However, itte research to date has focused on thelength of each individual recharge.

例句:

However, few writers hove been able to draw on anysystematic research into …

Short-tem studies such Qs these do not necessorilyshow subte changes over time..

Although extensive research has been carried out on, no single study exists which..

However, these results were bosed upon data fromover 30 years ago and it is unclear if Recent attemptsto understand x (e.g. Smith 1989; Jones 1992) paytoo itte attention to ..

相关文献调查(10分钟)

咱就把相关文献当中,之前注意到的问题单独拿出来,说明自己文献所参考的关键点在哪。

Example:.

More recent research has occurred in the fifield oflaptop and jPud batteries. Evans [15] studied the lfe-time in 5G jPud bttries. Smith [16] and Jones[18]found that …

However their ffindings failed to account for …

例句:

Existing research recognises the critical role played by…

lt is now well established from a variety of studies,that ..

A growing body of published work provides evidenceof ….

Recenty investigators have examined the effects of Xon Y….

作者的贡献(5分钟)

作者的付出也别忘了,1-2句就行

交代清楚,自己在论文里头提的观点是多么的先进Example:

To the best of our knowledge there are no results inthe literature regarding how the length of each re-charge impacts on the silver and gold in the electrodes.

例句:

The findings should make an important contributionto the field of …..

Therefore, this study makes a major contribution toresearch on X by demonstroting…

There are several important areas where this studymakes an original contribution to….

This research makes an important contribution by ..

⑦当前研究的目的(3分钟)

咱这研究的目的也得交代一下,不多,1-2句!

白告诉教授研究目标和预期的结果,让教授一眼就看出来作者使用了什么方法、为什么用这个方法。

Example:

The aim of the present work is to construct a modelto perform a comprehensive investigation of theeffect of recharging on the electrodes, and to find anew proportion in the amount of metals used.Theassumptions of Smith [16]and Jones [18] are used asa starting point ..

例句:

In the pages that follow, it will be argued that …In this essay, l attempt to defend the view that ..Specifically, the fllowing issues will be addressed:Secondly, the study aims to 0ssess the extent towhich ..

In the pages that fllow, the fllowing questions will beaddressed:

研究的主要结果(5分钟)

工咱的研究成果也得现眼一下,1–4句.

尽管后头还得在result. discussion. conelusOao’咱也得在这里简单提一下

Exomple:

The results of the model are encouraging and showthat ..

例句:

There were small but significant negative correlationsbetween …

A significant dfference was found between X1 andx2,t(1)= 2.906,p<0.01.

Respondents who reported low levels of X also re-ported significantly lower levels of Y.

可对未来研究的影响(2分钟)

确简述对未来研究的影响,1-2句

电得让教授明白,咱这研究可不是小事儿,还得埋个钩子,引着教授继续往下看

Exomple:

This new model will be able to …

例句:

It is hoped that this research will contribute to adeeper understanding of ….

This study aims to contribute to this growing area ofresearch by exploring….

This project provided an important opportunity toadvance the understanding of ..

Therefore, this study makes a major contribution toresearch on X by demonstroting..

There are several important areas where this studymakes an original contribution to….

回全文结构大纲(5分钟)

梳理全文的结构大纲,3-4个短句

  • 让人家明白咱的章节走向,省得晃眼睛找
  • Example:

Section 2 introduces the concept of .例句:

The essay has been organised in the fllowing way: .. .The remaining part of the paper proceeds as fllows: ..The main issues addressed in this paper are: o), b)and c)This paper first gives a brief overview of the recent history of x.

This paper has been divided into four parts. The firstpart deals with ..

 

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